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Lost.......Broken.......Faded away.......
Memories.......My memories......Lost, broken and faded away.......
Time stands still.......Who am I?........What happened?.......Something's gone...
Can't remember........Someone Help ME!!!.........
Frustration..........Agony.......Fear.......
The room is spinning.......A hand........A face.......Whose?.......
Frustration, agony and fear........
It stops........A hand, a face. Not mine......Who are you?.......
I can't remember........Do I know you?.....You smile.....
Safety......Happiness.......Love......
A touch.....You take my hand.......We walk away........
Safety, happiness and love.....
I smile back........With you I'll stay.....

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It's a little frustrating, I know... So I hope you can understand it. :)
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heavenabyss Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Student Writer
I get it, but I think it could also be a beginning for a story. Think about it.
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Y-kos Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok I'll think about it. I'm not that good in making stories, but I could try :)
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armymanski Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I like it:-) It is one of those poems everyone is going to have their own interpretation of. But that is a good thing.
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Y-kos Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thnx :D
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